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NSR~Soren (Fire Emblem)

Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 9:26 pm
by izmeister
V1
Image
v2
Image
v3(: o)
Image
v4(: O)
Image

CnC please. Please tell me how I can improve it.(and which is the best one)

Re: NSR~Soren (Fire Emblem)

Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 10:57 pm
by Montolio
Although you did a good job, I think you could clean it up a little around your character. I can see some pixels that look like they dont belong. Other than that, super cool

Re: NSR~Soren (Fire Emblem)

Posted: Tue Feb 10, 2009 11:07 pm
by IceCrash
looks like a wip
kiu

Re: NSR~Soren (Fire Emblem)

Posted: Wed Feb 11, 2009 12:17 pm
by rek
v4

looks sweet

Re: NSR~Soren (Fire Emblem)

Posted: Wed Feb 11, 2009 1:46 pm
by DumboDii
rek wrote:v4

looks sweet


+1.

Re: NSR~Soren (Fire Emblem)

Posted: Wed Feb 11, 2009 4:10 pm
by !G4!
rek wrote:v4

looks sweet


+1 Aswell ^_~

Re: NSR~Soren (Fire Emblem)

Posted: Wed Feb 11, 2009 7:45 pm
by Montolio
I feel like number 4 just looks faded out compared to the others. Am I missing something?

Re: NSR~Soren (Fire Emblem)

Posted: Wed Feb 11, 2009 8:06 pm
by Hostage
Montolio wrote:I feel like number 4 just looks faded out compared to the others. Am I missing something?



Oh no good sir. Stop while you can!It's dangerous to form an opinion out side the general consensus formed by the passels of the A which leads to the C. Oh now! I've said to much.......* runs before the phantom fanged Lime catches him*

In seriousness, agreed. They all look terribly faded, that vibrant life like feeling an art piece should have is missing. And the outerglow added only adds to the lifeless "last minute" slaped on feel to it. Sorry Iz, this is a down step for you. Don't fall into the trend some of the other new generation AC poster have fallen into and that is to mass produce sigs...take your time and leave aside you sig once in a while and come back looking at it in a new perspective each time. I can assure you each tiem you will have a new opinion/idea and that much more to add to it finally giving it that completed look...OMG to much text for small font I must leave now!

Re: NSR~Soren (Fire Emblem)

Posted: Wed Feb 11, 2009 8:38 pm
by Montolio
So far, I would say that Soren is much more the focal point in V2 than he is in all the others, but like I said earlier, it just needs cleaned up a bit. I also feel that the sig is missing something. I don't know what, but if I figure it out, I'll be sure to let you know! ;)

Re: NSR~Soren (Fire Emblem)

Posted: Wed Feb 11, 2009 9:10 pm
by izmeister
Hostage wrote:
Montolio wrote:I feel like number 4 just looks faded out compared to the others. Am I missing something?



Oh no good sir. Stop while you can!It's dangerous to form an opinion out side the general consensus formed by the passels of the A which leads to the C. Oh now! I've said to much.......* runs before the phantom fanged Lime catches him*

In seriousness, agreed. They all look terribly faded, that vibrant life like feeling an art piece should have is missing. And the outerglow added only adds to the lifeless "last minute" slaped on feel to it. Sorry Iz, this is a down step for you. Don't fall into the trend some of the other new generation AC poster have fallen into and that is to mass produce sigs...take your time and leave aside you sig once in a while and come back looking at it in a new perspective each time. I can assure you each tiem you will have a new opinion/idea and that much more to add to it finally giving it that completed look...OMG to much text for small font I must leave now!


Thanks for the advice in small font, it helped alot :)

Re: NSR~Soren (Fire Emblem)

Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 2:29 pm
by Hostage
izmeister wrote:Thanks for the advice in small font, it helped alot :)


It's what I do. :wink: