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nsr!

Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 11:36 am
by Melez
Image

Had some time making this one.. I think it's my best one

Stock image:
Spoiler!


C'n'C please!

Re: nsr!

Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 11:52 am
by cin
i personally don't really like it.

the focal seems to be too small
the colors don't work well together
the lighting is off
there is no depth

i've seen much better from you srsly >.<

for example, i liked this one way better
viewtopic.php?f=11&t=106596

Re: nsr!

Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 3:26 pm
by IceCrash
Tbh,i agree with cin as well mate.
I can't understand this one..
I think the effect you did with her hand is pretty cool but yeah O.o

Re: nsr!

Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 6:02 pm
by Melez
Well I tried something different from the other ones, I made like 10 tags that look like eachother. But thanks.

Re: nsr!

Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 12:18 pm
by rek
Focal is too small and the colouring, colour is the biggest problem in this tag. Try to blend that render in more, depth is non existent.

I like what u did with the cannon tho. kiu