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NSR~ Flute woman

Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 1:44 am
by izmeister
I plan on entering this on the next sig war since Verfo already announced his choice for a topic. I tried working on depth, but..meh

CnC please.
Image

Please tell me how I can improve it.

Re: NSR~ Flute woman

Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 10:24 am
by rek
Face is way too bright, compared to the rest on the tag. It looks kinda bland, did u have.. like a layer of black on really low opacity?

Lighting is off. Background looks boring. Maybe you could look up some tutorials on dA and some gfx sites.

Re: NSR~ Flute woman

Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 10:21 pm
by Kirkaldi
rek wrote:Face is way too bright, compared to the rest on the tag. It looks kinda bland, did u have.. like a layer of black on really low opacity?

Lighting is off. Background looks boring. Maybe you could look up some tutorials on dA and some gfx sites.

u are so harsh :twisted:

Re: NSR~ Flute woman

Posted: Wed Feb 04, 2009 11:07 pm
by izmeister
Kirkaldi wrote:
rek wrote:Face is way too bright, compared to the rest on the tag. It looks kinda bland, did u have.. like a layer of black on really low opacity?

Lighting is off. Background looks boring. Maybe you could look up some tutorials on dA and some gfx sites.

u are so harsh :twisted:


I would rather harsh then nice. Or some vague mix of both that you always seem to do -.-

Re: NSR~ Flute woman

Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 7:31 am
by rek
izmeister wrote:
Kirkaldi wrote:
rek wrote:Face is way too bright, compared to the rest on the tag. It looks kinda bland, did u have.. like a layer of black on really low opacity?

Lighting is off. Background looks boring. Maybe you could look up some tutorials on dA and some gfx sites.

u are so harsh :twisted:


I would rather harsh then nice. Or some vague mix of both that you always seem to do -.-


Sorry if it sounded harsh, didnt realise at the time.

<3

Re: NSR~ Flute woman

Posted: Thu Feb 05, 2009 10:33 am
by Melez
izmeister wrote:
Kirkaldi wrote:
rek wrote:Face is way too bright, compared to the rest on the tag. It looks kinda bland, did u have.. like a layer of black on really low opacity?

Lighting is off. Background looks boring. Maybe you could look up some tutorials on dA and some gfx sites.

u are so harsh :twisted:


I would rather harsh then nice. Or some vague mix of both that you always seem to do -.-


Yeah that's true. I really like when people point out what's bad, doesn't matter if they sound harsh or not, instead of saying "cool border, kiu!"