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Nsr
Posted: Tue Jan 27, 2009 9:46 pm
by izmeister
CnC please

Please tell me how I could improve it.
Re: Nsr
Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 12:26 am
by Kirkaldi
Tilt the render so it can go with the flow more.
Re: Nsr
Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 1:47 pm
by Ploxy
A bit too light at the left side, 7,5/10
Re: Nsr
Posted: Wed Jan 28, 2009 5:02 pm
by Melez
True, put the focal somewhere else, as it will flow better when it's, in this case, on the right. Also, pay attention to where your light source is, and where are the reflections on the focal. KIU!