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NSR~ GymClassHeroes

Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 12:29 am
by izmeister
CnC please

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Re: NSR~ GymClassHeroes

Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 12:31 am
by Kirkaldi
Font is :/ Background is messed up >_< The render is great though.

5/10

Re: NSR~ GymClassHeroes

Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 12:32 am
by izmeister
Kirkaldi wrote:Font is :/ Background is messed up >_< The render is great though.

5/10


Maybe you could say what about the background is messed up?

Re: NSR~ GymClassHeroes

Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 12:36 am
by Kirkaldi
The people in the background. Stuff coming out of there head and stuff on there head. Blur it. :)

Re: NSR~ GymClassHeroes

Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 12:45 am
by izmeister
Better?

Re: NSR~ GymClassHeroes

Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:00 am
by Shomari
You should really only have 1 focal point.

Re: NSR~ GymClassHeroes

Posted: Thu Jan 22, 2009 1:07 am
by izmeister
Shomari wrote:You should really only have 1 focal point.


The one who requested the sig wanted all 4 people in it :/