NSR~ GymClassHeroes

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CnC please

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Font is :/ Background is messed up >_< The render is great though.

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Kirkaldi wrote:Font is :/ Background is messed up >_< The render is great though.

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Maybe you could say what about the background is messed up?
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The people in the background. Stuff coming out of there head and stuff on there head. Blur it. :)
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Better?
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You should really only have 1 focal point.
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Shomari wrote:You should really only have 1 focal point.


The one who requested the sig wanted all 4 people in it :/
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