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NSR

Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 7:37 pm
by exality
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Dont be to harsh just getting back into the grove of things. Dont ask about the circles i was messing around and thats how it ended up. The text sux i know.

Re: NSR

Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 7:49 pm
by Melez
Well, get your focal to be a bit smaller so that it has some natural flow. It's not bad. KIU!

Re: NSR

Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 8:22 pm
by exality
I know what you mean but its kinda dificult with the render but i tried to fix it.

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I like this one better but there still something wrong with it

Re: NSR

Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 4:57 am
by Kirkaldi
Sig is too big and the focal. Try blurring the background a bit. kiu

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