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NSR- Painted Truly
Posted: Sun Jan 11, 2009 10:30 pm
by .Banshee
Re: NSR- Painted Truly
Posted: Fri Jan 16, 2009 11:57 am
by IceCrash
i think the sig is able to express itself, wich is good
i think the flow's messed up tho, there could be many reasons for this
the repetitive left side, and the fact that the head is big.. alsou basicly have no bg in the right part, i mean that could be alright but in this case it makes it plain and u dont know what to focus ur eyes on as well- The text, you could of had chosen complementar colours.. idk
I think you get what i mean, i like the head tho, gj :p
Re: NSR- Painted Truly
Posted: Fri Jan 16, 2009 12:00 pm
by Melez
The focal is really big.. Try not to have a face, alone as a focal. It looks nice, but I don't know, maybe lower the contrast. I don't know really.
Re: NSR- Painted Truly
Posted: Fri Jan 16, 2009 5:25 pm
by satman83
Its good...but looks like an accident in a paint shop 
7.5/10
Re: NSR- Painted Truly
Posted: Sat Jan 17, 2009 10:05 am
by rek
I dont like text that follows lines. Try to it them horizontal.
Re: NSR- Painted Truly
Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 9:36 am
by Priam
rek wrote:I dont like text that follows lines. Try to it them horizontal.
Exactly. Ignore everything else, expecially the contrast, which makes the sig, lower the contrast and it's junk. The lines and the text look horrid, those are your problem.
Re: NSR- Painted Truly
Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 10:48 am
by IceCrash
"ignore everything else" lol
Re: NSR- Painted Truly
Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 11:03 am
by Hostage
IceCrash wrote:"ignore everything else" lol
He's not wrong.
Re: NSR- Painted Truly
Posted: Mon Jan 19, 2009 12:07 pm
by Priam
IceCrash wrote:"ignore everything else" lol
And i'm not even lying.
