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NVR~My Bro :s

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Spoiler!


Blah, you guys know what the routine is :roll:
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LOL, when I was loading the image, I thought it was Adam Sandler. Kinda looks like him too. Haha. Otherwise, 8/10. Just add a mouth like the other one.
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lol it does look like adam sandler. 8/10, add a freaking mouth =P
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Indeed, it's very obstructing not to see a mouth on this piece, on the other one it wasn't great but it was OK, here it just.. Doesn't look good
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That's really good, Kraq.

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It's good, though you could get a bit deeper into shading.
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Awesome Kraq! 2x better then the one you showed me yesterday! Really like it, dude.
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:shock: Tutoials pls.
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Priam wrote:It's good, though you could get a bit deeper into shading.

Ye, I pretty much quit on the eagle :\

Where I learned :\
http://www.melissaclifton.com/tutorial-vector.html
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Kraq wrote:
Priam wrote:It's good, though you could get a bit deeper into shading.

Ye, I pretty much quit on the eagle :\

Where I learned :\
http://www.melissaclifton.com/tutorial-vector.html


Thanks a lot. Im gonna try out it soon.
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Your eyes are wack! dunno if it's the shading done on opposite ends but they look distorted, like on is bigger than the other.

Anywhores I'm digging the shirt the most-- stands out, face, not so much. A little more attention to detail could have been paid because as it stands right now it looks lifeless and that's not just because there is no mouth it's the eyes aswell. They just look like solid coloured circles. Even if you're going for a cartooned/animated look with your vectoring f.uck the rest make it simple if you want but always make your eyes pop it will add to your over all piece. No point in doing it if you're going to get lazy before it's finished.


Pro tip of the day: Whenever you post a vector, and/or a "realism" sig in SRF's case, post the original along side it because with out comparison we really can't tell you much criticism wise other than " ewww wtf is that!!!! take it away, AWAY I say!" and vice versa. Unless of course it was built up from scratch then no worries.

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Hostage wrote:Your eyes are wack! dunno if it's the shading done on opposite ends but they look distorted, like on is bigger than the other.

Anywhores I'm digging the shirt the most-- stands out, face, not so much. A little more attention to detail could have been paid because as it stands right now it looks lifeless and that's not just because there is no mouth it's the eyes aswell. They just look like solid coloured circles. Even if you're going for a cartooned/animated look with your vectoring f.uck the rest make it simple if you want but always make your eyes pop it will add to your over all piece. No point in doing it if you're going to get lazy before it's finished.


Pro tip of the day: Whenever you post a vector, and/or a "realism" sig in SRF's case, post the original along side it because with out comparison we really can't tell you much criticism wise other than " ewww wtf is that!!!! take it away, AWAY I say!" and vice versa. Unless of course it was built up from scratch then no worries.

Thanks, might add more to it ^^
will post original soon
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that's how I imagine Mr.Ganji to be like..

cuz the shirt is Mr.Ganji's sig.

Wait, is Mr.Ganji your bro?!
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no... no he isn't
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ROFL This is pretty good, but where is the mouth?
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I think it's kinda cool whitout the mouth.
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Hostage wrote:Anywhores


LOL :P
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