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NSR

Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 12:38 am
by izmeister
I'm still a noop with photoshop

Image

What do I need to do to improve it?

Re: NSR

Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 11:05 am
by Melez
Blur the BG a bit, I can't see what is BG and what is the effects well. Also, work on blending for now.

Re: NSR

Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 7:40 pm
by IceCrash
yeah
i think that, if u just think about how it looks only, it looks good but once you stop and look at it for a while, it seems like u have 3 diff things, left, middle, and right

Re: NSR

Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 10:10 pm
by Caras
The flow is seems to be going in different places and the render seems distorted, I don't know if it is, though. But should try to work in some depth as well blending.

Re: NSR

Posted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 10:19 pm
by IceCrash
oh, i just noticed he's helding his sword >.> lol

Re: NSR

Posted: Sun Dec 14, 2008 2:17 am
by Kirkaldi
Sharpen it a bit, and the flow is right left right left down. Fix it.

Re: NSR

Posted: Tue Dec 16, 2008 12:15 am
by izmeister
How about now?
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Re: NSR

Posted: Tue Dec 16, 2008 12:40 am
by Kirkaldi
Other one was still better, and its still over sharpened. :banghead:

Re: NSR

Posted: Tue Dec 16, 2008 7:34 pm
by IceCrash
imo, that one's a lot better : D
u gave it a "better" flow :P
about being over sharpened, so what.. it looks good......