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I was just Bored...
(when i was making this. I only have 3 things for disposal. 1.) Pencil 2.) Paper 3.) Eraser ) thats all.
and to add it all up... this is just my first time to draw this thing... i WONT take "TCM" as reply i need you to be honest and frank, and leave some advise so that i can draw much better. and i know that i drew is really like the one in the mini pic. soo please for give me... be gentle

eyes are a bit too wide, but all in all its good

You have a nice drawing skill Rakion

Looks great but eyes are too wide. kiu

Thanks guys

I'll do my best next sketch, next will be my sis , and probably post it when its really really ready.

Pretty good.

Some lines are a tiny bit off, and i disagree on the eyes, the lines all add up.

Nice work, kiu. I cant draw for anything.

Forehead too small, ears too high, upper eye line should be accentuated not the whole edge of the eye, the eye shape is wrong, it should look like fabric holding a ball in a socket, not rectangular, pupils are way too big, corner of mouth, nostrils, and neck, in that order, are the darkest parts yet you have the bridge of the nose as the darkest part, nose too long(or maybe that's from the high ears, dunno), you didn't draw the back of her neck . . . it should at least trail off, the left upper corner to the mouth's structure is wrong, it goes down then diagonally down, not curved, besides that, it's ok.

Looks pretty good to me

nice, and I love the eyes.

KIU.