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NSR~Ironman

Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 1:58 am
by Shomari
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C&C plz.

Re: NSR~Ironman

Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 2:11 am
by Kirkaldi
i love the flow.

Re: NSR~Ironman

Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 7:24 am
by Melez
B/W works for me. Very nice..

Re: NSR~Ironman

Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 7:41 am
by Priam
It's very decent.

Though the theme 'Iron Man' would make me expect a little more 'action' colow wise.

Re: NSR~Ironman

Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 7:34 pm
by lavapockets
I love the background, it looks awesome. I like the colors you're using, but for me they seem a little "washed". I don't know how else to say it. Try playing with curves a little and see if you can darken up the deeper shades, I think that would help a ton. Very nice otherwise.

Re: NSR~Ironman

Posted: Thu Oct 23, 2008 9:57 pm
by Shomari
lavapockets wrote:I love the background, it looks awesome. I like the colors you're using, but for me they seem a little "washed". I don't know how else to say it. Try playing with curves a little and see if you can darken up the deeper shades, I think that would help a ton. Very nice otherwise.

I like the pale colors.
:)

Re: NSR~Ironman

Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 2:32 pm
by lavapockets
I'm not suggesting you nix the pale colors, I like them. But your deeper colors look like they were deeper colors you placed a while gradient over. I just think it makes it look washed out. :D

Re: NSR~Ironman

Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 2:55 pm
by Hostage
I love it Shamori! The smudging is just dope it's not over powered in anyway what's so ever. The colours work and it has nice lighting only thing I would add to give it that extra humph is some stars in your negative area set to like overlay or soft light. Give it that spacey atmosphere to it.

I won't mention the text since everyone in the AC has a disturbing fetish for them like their work will get ripped if they don't throw their name on there or something but if you had to make that small isn't better just to scrap it so not pull away from your focal?

Re: NSR~Ironman

Posted: Fri Oct 24, 2008 3:10 pm
by IceCrash
i think it rocks
gj