TheKnight wrote:
Much much much much much better. The face shouldnt be covered but thats ok.
Try moving the text closer to your focal kinda like mine, in fact try just "theknight" right under her hair on the right side.
Number one is much better transition wise with the colors. You do need to work on flow but thats ok for now.
Very good job.
overall pretty good imo
) since the shadow on the left side makes it look like a copy-pasted image on Paint. Also, the light source on the face compared to the sun in the background makes it look a bit odd. But aside from those, I like what you've done with it. Keep it up 
