NSR ~ dream?
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christina
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NSR ~ dream?
I did this one in about an hour, was kinda bored, i think its alright, but kinda fuzzy and i dont know how to change it =(
<<Left because of dumbshit people like stallowned>>
While you're getting better, it honestly seems like you didn't put much time into this one, like Faiien said.
There's a few things that I'd like to point out:
1. You don't have a good flow to your Sig. Her hair is flying every which way, and it seems quite confusing overall.
2. It doesn't seem like you did an awful much to it. I think you blended the render in decently well, but it seems like all you did was add a gradient to the back, a light source, slap the render on, and then slightly blend it in. Maybe some more effects next time? There's a difference between being simplistic, and it not having much done to it at all.
3. Like Faiien pointed out, I don't like your font much on this one, nor the placement of your text. In my opinion, I think that the Playboy bunny is getting in the way on this Sig of you placing your text properly. Maybe you should move it to the side or something, and move your text more into the corner. The position of your text just isn't overly fantastic.
Just a few quick things; something to work on, and perhaps something to think about.
6/10. Not your best by any means, but you're definitely getting better. Sorry if I was a bit harsh. Just trying to give you some decent critique is all. After all, that's how you get better. :]
There's a few things that I'd like to point out:
1. You don't have a good flow to your Sig. Her hair is flying every which way, and it seems quite confusing overall.
2. It doesn't seem like you did an awful much to it. I think you blended the render in decently well, but it seems like all you did was add a gradient to the back, a light source, slap the render on, and then slightly blend it in. Maybe some more effects next time? There's a difference between being simplistic, and it not having much done to it at all.
3. Like Faiien pointed out, I don't like your font much on this one, nor the placement of your text. In my opinion, I think that the Playboy bunny is getting in the way on this Sig of you placing your text properly. Maybe you should move it to the side or something, and move your text more into the corner. The position of your text just isn't overly fantastic.
Just a few quick things; something to work on, and perhaps something to think about.
6/10. Not your best by any means, but you're definitely getting better. Sorry if I was a bit harsh. Just trying to give you some decent critique is all. After all, that's how you get better. :]