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NSR~ Sprite

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Long time since I've made any sigs but now it's different. It's my first time doing a sprite sig so here you go hope that you like it.

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Hello, John. Looks like you followed this tut :D rawr. http://pirana0.com/upload/files/108/Tut ... or-tut.jpg

Details: I don't get what the light source is doing at the bottom. The light is appearing on the upper right. Not sure what the brushing is on the upper left is that light source too? If I were you, I would've done something with the plain white background. The font doesn't quite suit it ...and edge text.... Keep in mind, if the step in the tut doesn't quite suit it then ditch it. Don't take it in the wrong way, I have a knack for pointing out flaws. :D Looks good. You start making sigs often again.

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I... sense....snudge....

cin

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sprite too static imo.

don't really like sprites, best thing about most of em is that it seems like the
figure is making some kind of punch or flying kick move. this dude is just
standing there while the ground around him seems to be moved by something
we cant see.

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Post by Snudge »

BrokenSaint wrote:I... sense....snudge....


Screw you :>

Anyway, I think most has been mentioned already.

Next time, try to pick a sprite with quite some flow, and font place the lightsource at the bottom. Unless you want to continue like this, you should've started off with C4D's, so the bottom would've been brighter in the first place. :)
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Post by LM »

Bwahahahah! Time to stare at your sig and blurt all the possible mistakes! :D

First of all, its just brushes, gradient map, C4D set on lighten and more brushes. The sprite is fine, but the flow you decided on for the whole sig was out of place. The upper left brush is pixelated, i can see some erasures on some of the lines. The border isn't really helping. Text isn't helping either. Overall it's just brushing and some C4d effects blah blah blah.

Really HFS89, do you want me to do this again and again. LOL :D It's ok JC.
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Post by 0l3n »

How do you know its all brushes?

He could have done that with the pen tool.
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Post by BrokenSaint »

You don't need to figure out what it is, just check out the tut he followed. It's in my last post...

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