i didnt have the border this time wrap around the image, instead only on top and bottom.... does it help it, or hurt it ?
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durkadurka
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i thought this one looks pretty good. i think tho the text placement is off. please rate and comment... thanks
i didnt have the border this time wrap around the image, instead only on top and bottom.... does it help it, or hurt it ?
i didnt have the border this time wrap around the image, instead only on top and bottom.... does it help it, or hurt it ?
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Not every sig has to have a border. The border seems to be strong and harsh and dont really think it compliments the sig. Could just tone it down a little. Dunno if it's just me but the render seem a lil blurry + lighting is a lil off. But definately an improvemnt but i still prefer ur current.
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durkadurka
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yea the render itself i think is a bit blurry. this is what it looks like by its self...
only thing i did to it as far as the sig is concerned was that i shrunk it a bit
i think the bruishing for the bg's are getting a bit old to me, imma start trying to create bg's instead of brushing them in, but if you were to visit the poll thread of all the pieces ive done, #2 is the only one that i didnt brush. i made that BG from scratch, and its pretty plain... how do yall make yours? not the exact way, but a breif way...
like do you take a picture and distort it, or render it or w/e
only thing i did to it as far as the sig is concerned was that i shrunk it a bit
i think the bruishing for the bg's are getting a bit old to me, imma start trying to create bg's instead of brushing them in, but if you were to visit the poll thread of all the pieces ive done, #2 is the only one that i didnt brush. i made that BG from scratch, and its pretty plain... how do yall make yours? not the exact way, but a breif way...
like do you take a picture and distort it, or render it or w/e
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tbh, i kindof hate it 
not only the colors of the render and bg (i know, you used the colors from the
render, but i dont like the render's colors either), but also the colors of your
border and text completely dont go with the rest of the piece.
the background, i don't like it. it looks really flat cause of the lack of shadow,
lighting and other depth effects. the text is too plain and is really hard to read
on the dark yellow (orange?) line in the background.
all and all, i'd give it a 3,5-4/10 as it is. not cause i dont like your work, but
because i know (and have seen) you can do better than this.
not only the colors of the render and bg (i know, you used the colors from the
render, but i dont like the render's colors either), but also the colors of your
border and text completely dont go with the rest of the piece.
the background, i don't like it. it looks really flat cause of the lack of shadow,
lighting and other depth effects. the text is too plain and is really hard to read
on the dark yellow (orange?) line in the background.
all and all, i'd give it a 3,5-4/10 as it is. not cause i dont like your work, but
because i know (and have seen) you can do better than this.