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binnosh
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Post by binnosh »

trying to improove my talents so i've tried something new :p
c&c please
and yes text needs work..

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Edit:
new C&C please :p
new text and light
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changed contrast a bit
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Last edited by binnosh on Fri Oct 26, 2007 3:40 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Post by TwelveEleven »

6/10

1. improve the txt
2. brighter light at the end of the tunnel
3. should be more tunnelish
4. think it looks as if you pasted txt over it
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Post by rek »

More depth. Kill the text.
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Post by binnosh »

made a couple changes, lemme know what you think of it now,

tnx for the previous comments:p think it looks better now, even tho text editing isn't one of my best tricks :D
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