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Foilin
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by Foilin » Fri Oct 05, 2007 9:33 pm
so after looking at tuts and things like that i kinda tried to add what i had read/learned together. rate it please, tell me what i can improve on ect ect
Gusy
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by Gusy » Sat Oct 06, 2007 12:06 am
Really nice cept a lil too big for me
8? I dono, I'm not good with rating things
I know my sig and avatar is outdated..
Hostage
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by Hostage » Sat Oct 06, 2007 12:35 am
the word "ironman" kinda looks outta place ,unno it could just be me but it looked odd to me at first glance other wise really nice.
rek
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by rek » Sat Oct 06, 2007 1:28 am
There is two focals in your sig, and thats a bad thing. And when you choose colours choose ones that match with the sig. And the flow could you some work, its the was things go.. direction.
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Foilin
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by Foilin » Sat Oct 06, 2007 3:11 am
And the flow could you some work, its the was things go.. direction.
WTF? Does not Compute o_O
rek
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by rek » Sat Oct 06, 2007 3:53 am
Direction... You see how ironman looks like he is flying left? but you have lines going evywhere.. these lines conflict with the "flow".
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Hostage
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by Hostage » Sat Oct 06, 2007 5:04 am
Foilin wrote: And the flow could use some work, its the way things go.. direction.
WTF? Does not Compute o_O
I think thats what he meant
[SD]Kratos
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by [SD]Kratos » Sat Oct 06, 2007 8:11 am
something u can easily improve is the text
Now about the flow, if the lines were going in same direction as ironman, it would be really better i think.
Did u use a fractal creation program or just a filter?
rek
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by rek » Sat Oct 06, 2007 8:18 am
Brushes, my friend.
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[SD]Kratos
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by [SD]Kratos » Sat Oct 06, 2007 9:08 am
reK wrote: Brushes, my friend.
fractal brushes? thats gay!
Better create ur own fractal and then put it as layer :O me thinks
HavinFunSince89
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by HavinFunSince89 » Sat Oct 06, 2007 1:16 pm
I have just one thing to say this is just like what rizla said before.
"It looks like strawberry-kiwi puke" try to use colors that match with the sig.
BrokenSaint
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by BrokenSaint » Sun Oct 07, 2007 2:23 am
I believe he DID choose colors that matched with the focal, just the color balance needs work I guess.
Shadowman20818
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by Shadowman20818 » Sun Oct 07, 2007 2:30 am
Just select color and get it over with.
Also, fractal brushes=easy, making your own would take work.
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