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School project ~ product poster

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school project
ok. this is a school project im workin on.
the product is a little machine i worked on at my internship company, the
actual product is the scent coming from it. i want to make it clear that this
is the product, and i want to make clear without using words, that its a scent
diffusing machine.

my idea
now, about my idea, its the machine with pentooled lines comin from it, giving
the people a feeling of flow gowing out of the machine and growing bigger.
in between i want to create a feeling of different smells in colors. i chose for
the colors purple/red/green/blue; purple still missing atm. this poster will be
in A0 sizes in the end, i'd just like some comments on what i got so far.

planning
i am workin on a clipping mask to go over the colored parts to make em look
like bubbles ending up in small bubbles n fading out, but school got pshop 7
n that one dont have clippin mask tool yet -.-

anyways, some comments on this please, and some tips on what i should
do better/differently.

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Is that you surfing there? :shock:

Nice poster xD
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The lines are pixelated. Maybe it could use a fourth pic?

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hehe pixelated maybe cause i resized it quickly to save 56k-ers from crashin :P

anyways, i now workin on it still.. added some reflection on the bottom so the
machine isnt floatin anymore :D

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Don't like the green can, or w/e it is, everything else is very nice.
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Shadowman20818 wrote:Don't like the green can, or w/e it is, everything else is very nice.

EKEKE :D

thats the product :P

thats like.. the whole pity about the project.. its gotta have a product u worked
on like durin an internship.. -.-

anyways, photoshop @ school sucks. dont even have all tools i need for this
thingy i wanna make. anyways, keep the tips comin. glad yall likes it so far :)

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cin wrote:
Shadowman20818 wrote:Don't like the green can, or w/e it is, everything else is very nice.

EKEKE :D

thats the product :P

thats like.. the whole pity about the project.. its gotta have a product u worked
on like durin an internship.. -.-

anyways, photoshop @ school sucks. dont even have all tools i need for this
thingy i wanna make. anyways, keep the tips comin. glad yall likes it so far :)


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Remote Desktop! :D
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TwelveEleven wrote:
cin wrote:
Shadowman20818 wrote:Don't like the green can, or w/e it is, everything else is very nice.

EKEKE :D

thats the product :P

thats like.. the whole pity about the project.. its gotta have a product u worked
on like durin an internship.. -.-

anyways, photoshop @ school sucks. dont even have all tools i need for this
thingy i wanna make. anyways, keep the tips comin. glad yall likes it so far :)


2 words:

Remote Desktop! :D

2 more words

laptop dead

:(

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cin wrote:
TwelveEleven wrote:
cin wrote:
Shadowman20818 wrote:Don't like the green can, or w/e it is, everything else is very nice.

EKEKE :D

thats the product :P

thats like.. the whole pity about the project.. its gotta have a product u worked
on like durin an internship.. -.-

anyways, photoshop @ school sucks. dont even have all tools i need for this
thingy i wanna make. anyways, keep the tips comin. glad yall likes it so far :)


2 words:

Remote Desktop! :D

2 more words

laptop dead

:(

sexy shadowman

Maybe change the background from black? Black and green are hideous together for me X.X
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hmmm well black n green CAN look pretty awesome..

i will try some more out tomorrow. :)

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Great job with the poster so far cin. I'm totally art-deaf I get amazed by photoshop stuff easily :P Whats supposed to go in the left-most bubble right beside the strawberries?
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i fixt some coffee, chocolates n brownies in there 8)

will post tomorrow. it looks very tasty.. imagine that on A0 size ;)

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That yellow thing doesn't look like a scent diffusing machine....just yet :P Do you have a design for the lable or something?
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Post by cin »

checks this 8)

https://www.air-aroma.com/Diffuser-Details.aspx?ID=2

am in bed now sleepy times <3

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cin wrote:checks this 8)

https://www.air-aroma.com/Diffuser-Details.aspx?ID=2

am in bed now sleepy times <3

$235.00AUD each

holy shit
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cin wrote:hehe pixelated maybe cause i resized it quickly to save 56k-ers from crashin :P


Your so considerate, :love:
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You can see the edge on every image, erase more with a soft brush.
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0l3n wrote:You can see the edge on every image, erase more with a soft brush.


your right, the leaves and the cherries. not sure about the surfing..

otherwise good job :]
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nice find on that guys. will work on that asap ;)

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Dont want to be a pain in the ass but here you go if you havnt noticed.

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Those aero thinks are so sexy. I want one.
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dom wrote:Those aero thinks are so sexy. I want one.


:love: :love: :love: me to! :(

Cin can you buy me one.
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things :x

Next time don't quote me when I have a typo, I can't edit it away :(
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dom wrote:things :x

Next time don't quote me when I have a typo, I can't edit it away :(


We still :love: you. :)
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dom wrote:things :x

Next time don't quote me when I have a typo, I can't edit it away :(


Didnt notice :shock:

Its going in signature right away. :P

Just kidding.
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