My T-Shirt.

cin · Post by **cin** » Sun Sep 23, 2007 6:00 am

Riz, you know im not a pro so idk what skills are needed for something like
this.. but

1) i dont like the composition; its like the pics are just smacked on the shirt,
there is no.. how us ay it.. they dont really fit together. neither do the colors.
2) i see a silhouette is all that's left of what used to look like a shirt; i dont
see any shadow lines, and looking at the neck part it looks like the selection
thats been colored wasnt made properly
3) maybe this third one is cause im used to seeing awesome works from you,
but unless you brushed all objects yourself, i even dont really see a difficulty
in this piece oO
4) fourth n last, i personally dont like the txt

dont get me wrong, it looks okay as a whole.. im just used to seeing pieces
of you i really love.. n i just dont love this one

edit: im off about all day, so i cant see ur reply till the end

u know im
not trying to bring you down or whatever. stated up there is just my opinion.

expect some nice car pics tonight btw. off to the IAA Frankfurt

Rizla · Post by **Rizla** » Sun Sep 23, 2007 6:04 am

cin wrote:but unless you brushed all objects yourself

90-95%.

This piece is intended to simulate the feel of a David Lynch film, which I believe I accomplished thoroughly. On top of that it was a challenge from one of my friends - composition must desegregate urban/natural environments.

I guess I'm getting tired of the same old pen tooled lines and silhouettes.

Just an afterthought - I can pump out 'pretty' pieces that people on this forum will eat up like candy all day long, it's a pretty simple equation.

cin · Post by **cin** » Sun Sep 23, 2007 6:07 am

>.< I edited your post darnitall.

edit: could u also be specific on what's brushed? oO

Rizla · Post by **Rizla** » Sun Sep 23, 2007 6:21 am

cin wrote:edit: could u also be specific on what's brushed? oO

Everything but the mans face, and the type on the sleeve/open sign. And it's not all 'brushed' some of the assets I created in 3dsmax.

Snudge · Post by **Snudge** » Sun Sep 23, 2007 8:41 am

The lanternpost didn't make it.

Anyway, the only think I really don't like is that the colour-change used for the shirt looks like 'a selection made, filled and lowered opacity'. You've lost the 'texture' of the shirt, which could've been avoided by setting the layer to multiply(Even though that doesn't work with the darker colours, I'm sure you know of more ways)

That said I do have to say I love it, the compo is great(even though a bit hectic), and id looks just amazing(to me xD)

0l3n · Post by **0l3n** » Sun Sep 23, 2007 3:17 pm

I love the idea but somethings not right...

I cant put my finger on it.

Luoma · Post by **Luoma** » Sun Sep 23, 2007 3:26 pm

great artwork but it doesn't have a real t-shirt feel to it, looks abit unrealistic maby?

i dunno

Xyzzzy · Post by **Xyzzzy** » Sun Sep 23, 2007 9:35 pm

It looks really nice, but it doesnt seem like a t-shirt to me

Rizla · Post by **Rizla** » Sun Sep 23, 2007 9:49 pm

0l3n wrote:I love the idea but somethings not right...

I cant put my finger on it.

I can

Trust me I'm aware of most of the issues in the piece, just didn't have the time to fix them. The main issue is shadows, most assets don't have any.

Hostage · Post by **Hostage** » Sun Sep 23, 2007 11:06 pm

I actually like it alot its sumthing i would purchase and my tast in clothing is more urban/hip hop so i already have a few shirts that resemble this the only issue I'm having are the sleeves the art work is overflowing and onto them making the sleeves kinda look like there not there