skull divers

aazumak · Post by **aazumak** » Thu Jun 21, 2007 7:04 pm

well i made this for skull diver

how do u guys feel about it?

Rizla · Post by **Rizla** » Thu Jun 21, 2007 7:14 pm

flow and depth are wonderful.

the bottom of your ribbon seems too grey, I say just fade it out overall or clipping mask just the bottom.

text ruins it. you would be much better off making it horizontal and placed together.

8.5/10 without text.
6/10 with the text.

aazumak · Post by **aazumak** » Thu Jun 21, 2007 8:08 pm

where would u put the text?

Priam · Post by **Priam** » Thu Jun 21, 2007 8:21 pm

mmm i'm not feeling the render, it kinda looks randomply placed in there to me.

still 7/10 though

CrimsonNuker · Post by **CrimsonNuker** » Fri Jun 22, 2007 1:35 am

Rizla wrote:flow and depth are wonderful.

the bottom of your ribbon seems too grey, I say just fade it out overall or clipping mask just the bottom.

text ruins it. you would be much better off making it horizontal and placed together.

8.5/10 without text.
6/10 with the text.

+1

7/10

skulldiver · Post by **skulldiver** » Fri Jun 22, 2007 6:46 am

as posted in the request thread, really like it aazumak

thanks !