New sig, Need Critisism and hints.

[Hudders]

(this is one i made earlier tonight)
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(New one i made earlier tonight based on peoples feedback.)
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Bare in mind this is only 2nd & 3rd ones i have ever made. Please base votes on 2nd one.


Thank you.

[0l3n]

the background is too plain, you used a coupple of filters and thats about it. the render is blury. and the text is ok

[Insane_Panda]

render is too blury, i personally dont liek the dots or watever it is on the render, bg is simple... good for ur first couple of sigs, try reading some tutorials, and become a tutorial whore like me

[Padawin]

... and become a tutorial whore like me

dont make me hate you