New motion designer

[tweaklizer]

Hey guys, Havn't been on the forums in a while, but I'm back now I've recently started up motion design work, Was wondering if i could get some feedback from you? This is my second design, and personally I think its going well!



Many thanks!

[poehalcho]

There's a lot of pointless stuff going on there. the one that specifically bothers me is the turning at the end.

but stuff like ball -> blob -> sun -> text is also just random...
good use of sound though.

[tweaklizer]

There's a lot of pointless stuff going on there. the one that specifically bothers me is the turning at the end.

but stuff like ball -> blob -> sun -> text is also just random...
good use of sound though.

Its not random it is the style of work, and the text is the persons name who it was made for, and thanks I spend ages working on the sound part

[Skyve]

Kept playing this again and again. Fairly high.

Love it.

[tweaklizer]

Kept playing this again and again. Fairly high.

Love it.

haha thanks alot

[*BlackFox]

Simple but looks good!