Space that is not alive

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Space that is not alive

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First smudge sig in like a year
Im satisfied with the result but what do u peepz think?

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very good, but remove text. It honestly looks pretty great, maybe only contrast between sharp and smudge is too strong. Try going with a light smudge over the rest of the guy as well :?
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Really nice. I find the dark smudge particules around certain area of the render a bit annoying, the rest is great.

I lol'd. Dead Space = Space that is not alive. :giveup:
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Dead Space, focal smudge, and clipping masks, looks very generic and boring.

Try adding more effects and some more color.
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i like the effects and that stuff, render looks great. but the text... not so much idk why
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Thanks guys for your comments :)
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