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chrisorg
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by chrisorg » Mon Sep 27, 2010 6:38 pm
C&C please
Older stuff
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First one
Second one
Regular
No text
Dark
Dark no text(my favourite)
Me likes this new one very much
Made this in like 20 minutes, just to try out b&w
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by poehalcho » Mon Sep 27, 2010 7:46 pm
First = great second = not so. the style of the images differs to much to blend well. and the thing above his head should be blurred more. right now the placement of things is very confusing. I can't tell what's where. Among the choices the no text light version is best.
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by Skyve » Mon Sep 27, 2010 10:27 pm
First: Cool, nice effects. Second: I don't like it in general.
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by Kraq » Tue Sep 28, 2010 5:02 am
I actually prefer the second more, by far. It has better flow and is filled up more. The first's bg is pretty empty and theres only one effect.
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by chrisorg » Tue Sep 28, 2010 10:47 am
Thanks guys for your input
Gonna make something new today if I have the time.
About the first one... Im kinda into simple backrounds and small effects, don't know why but I prefer them heh
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by Fiction » Tue Sep 28, 2010 1:45 pm
Is it just me or does size seem like an issue here? Just odd size for me anyways. Another thing is the letter box, it works on some things, but i dk.(I'm going on your current sig, that looks like the first one, with some contrast changes.
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by chrisorg » Tue Sep 28, 2010 7:05 pm
Buuuump
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by Kraq » Tue Sep 28, 2010 11:42 pm
Hawt The warm orange on his chest is out of place though, no reason for it to be there. Change it to silver/blue or add another light source.
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by chrisorg » Wed Sep 29, 2010 4:25 am
Kraq wrote: Hawt The warm orange on his chest is out of place though, no reason for it to be there. Change it to silver/blue or add another light source.
Yeah, I sharpened his man chest a little bit too much
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by Skyve » Wed Sep 29, 2010 4:52 am
Nice one
Love all the effects on the right, although kinda make the left look empty.
P.S: Is it me or this is your like 4rth-5th Crysis tag?
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chrisorg
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by chrisorg » Wed Sep 29, 2010 12:26 pm
Thanks and actually it should be a second one... dunno how I always crab this render
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by chrisorg » Wed Sep 29, 2010 8:08 pm
Buump again lol
v2- sharper bg
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by poehalcho » Wed Sep 29, 2010 9:39 pm
^background is blurred too much even in the 2nd version. it doesn't really have depth. I think the bg is just wrong to start with.
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by Doron » Wed Sep 29, 2010 10:55 pm
^^The render is still too pixely, especially on the shoulders and hat. For the rest, I like them all, but B&W > color.
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by chrisorg » Fri Oct 01, 2010 2:22 pm
Thanks and updated first post
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by chrisorg » Sat Oct 02, 2010 6:47 pm
Bump again
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by Key-J » Sun Oct 03, 2010 4:15 pm
They are pretty awesome, i know i might not be the best one for technical advice, but in the "do they make me look bad ass" department, i am king and they do =D
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by Deadsolid » Sun Oct 03, 2010 4:28 pm
The newer ones are great, I didn't much care for the first ones.