[DRN] opinion bout this?

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Doron
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[DRN] opinion bout this?

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I think it's too much...

then again, haven't shopped in ages..

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EDIT3: V2
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EDIT4:
V3
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V4
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EDIT: i liek leopard.

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Last edited by Doron on Tue Jul 13, 2010 6:42 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Your focal isn't well rendered,but I respect the fact you rendered it yourself. I also love the leopard :D I'd just maybe change the "black spiral" because it seems pretty randoom.
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remove the smudges behind your renders, it's ruining your blending rather than improving it
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it's their doubles..

I'll try to see if I can do that, but I have no idea if I saved it right...
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Added V3 and 4!

Changed the glowline, removed the doubles and removed the spiral
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