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[TK] Final fantasy XIII - Oerba Dia Vanille

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Any comments? Now when i think it, the text look like somekidn of car racing font..or something like that.

Character in sig is called Oerba Dia Vanille, she is mysterious girl but always cheerful and happy, reminds me of Rikku in FFX and FFX-2. Im a Final Fantasy fan and this isn't my first FF sig, actually my first sig ever was done from FFX Yuna.
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The text is fine, but your sig structure is not. What I've noticed is that you repeat making one sig over and over, that is, only change the render while the compo of your sig never changes from: slap render, bit of smudge, slap c4d, slap text, done. What I want you to do is try other methods, there are a lot, just experiment a bit or search for some in tuts/psds or whatever
ps. this one is better than your last few ones
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Agree with Melez.
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That has to hurt. :( If it helps I think the girl in the sig looks stupid =P but not that bad of a sig.

We all have our own style though, and not everyone like to do a large range of styles.
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Babying makes beginners worse.
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Kraq wrote:Babying makes beginners worse.


True.

OT: Why do you have that little purple image down there?
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I agree with Melez too...

OT: That purple sig is so awsome, I would love a tut for that one
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chrisorg wrote:I agree with Melez too...

OT: That purple sig is so awsome, I would love a tut for that one

I don't think its exactly hard to make(No offence to Kraq,u know ur pro :D ) unless he had to actual do the stars and halos. Otherwise seem's like a Hue Variation to me :P

On topic ; I like the lightning but I don't think they are placed in a realistic way.I like the render though :D
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chrisorg wrote:I agree with Melez too...

OT: That purple sig is so awsome, I would love a tut for that one

Step 1: Smudge.

/Done.
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Shomari wrote:
chrisorg wrote:I agree with Melez too...

OT: That purple sig is so awsome, I would love a tut for that one

Step 1: Smudge.

/Done.


Dang that's easier than a PBJ!
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