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Way beyond the horizon!

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well hmm... one of my first jobs! i was bored and a little inspired!
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and so i did this! Any suggestions and appreciations are really welcomed!
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1. thxs to "GothicSelene" from DeviantArt
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2. thxs to "sheisprettystock" from DeviantArt!
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it wasn't a bad idea...but
1. It's very easy to see that the girl was just stuck on there.
2. The text needs to go away or least be changed to something that sticks out less...

I do like the heart you stuck up there...
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It's pretty nice! But, I agree with poehalcho
You should remove that text completely.
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poehalcho wrote:it wasn't a bad idea...but
1. It's very easy to see that the girl was just stuck on there.
2. The text needs to go away or least be changed to something that sticks out less...

I do like the heart you stuck up there...


thxs for the tips^^

1. im not sure of what u mean with the girl!
2. yeah i wasnt happy with the text! but without it just look empty lol imm try to reduce it or delete it at least

ty guys ^^
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Darling, he means that it looks like the girl is not really "in" the picture. Feel me?

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Tsume wrote:Darling, he means that it looks like the girl is not really "in" the picture. Feel me?

got it!
i deleted a layer and i didnt notice lol
i fixed it but im lazy to reupload lol
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I gotta be honest with you, I really didn't like it that much. I would suggest getting a "clean" background picture next time and just add the effects there yourself since this one just looks too awkward. The girl really looks copy-pasted and it doesn't give you the feel that she's walking through an open field. Just keep practicing and have fun :D

And yes, the text has to go. :soosad:
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