background+poem

[.Banshee]

[hitokiri]

The poem is interesting. I like some of the wording, but at the same time I cant get into it. I think its me personally, but from what I read it was well written and Im guessin has a lot more meaning then i can take from it.

Good choice of the background, in that it really doesnt stand out. It is what it should be, the back drop. I had to actually focus on it to really take it in, which in this application is what you'd want, not people focusing on the background instead of your writing.

Nice job

[*BlackFox]

Nice, I like it

[Crowley]

Wow, that's great. GJ man.

[.Banshee]

Thanks every1 HTV's critique is especially appreciated