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third time's the charm

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third sig ever
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Too plain. Doesn't seem like you put a lot of effort into smudging.
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Instead of just telling him what the problem is Kirk, tell him how he can fix it.
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Blindfire wrote:Instead of just telling him what the problem is Kirk, tell him how he can fix it.

Instead of telling me what to do, criticize his work! :x

You can fix it by umm, adding in some c4ds and smudge more.
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Plain isn't always bad.

Whitespace, anyone? It's a proper design element.
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Priam wrote:Plain isn't always bad.

Whitespace, anyone? It's a proper design element.

If you say so. :)

Oh, and welcome back. :love:
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Kirk, shut up :P . It's pretty good for a third sig, the white space is within it's element and doesn't look empty.
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.Banshee wrote:Kirk, shut up :P . It's pretty good for a third sig, the white space is within it's element and doesn't look empty.

Are you a girl or boy? If you are a girl, Kirk is interested. :shock:
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Kirkaldi wrote:
.Banshee wrote:Kirk, shut up :P . It's pretty good for a third sig, the white space is within it's element and doesn't look empty.

Are you a girl or boy? If you are a girl, Kirk is interested. :shock:


Nope but I'm still interested :love:
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.Banshee wrote:
Kirkaldi wrote:
.Banshee wrote:Kirk, shut up :P . It's pretty good for a third sig, the white space is within it's element and doesn't look empty.

Are you a girl or boy? If you are a girl, Kirk is interested. :shock:


Nope but I'm still interested :love:

oh but im not. :P
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Kirkaldi wrote:
Priam wrote:Plain isn't always bad.

Whitespace, anyone? It's a proper design element.

If you say so. :)

Oh, and welcome back. :love:


Thanks!
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It's original and very nice for a third. kiu
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thanks so more intensive smudging next time?
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dude1977956 wrote:thanks so more intensive smudging next time?


Dont listen to kirk, its good.
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I give the best criticism here. :P
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Kirkaldi wrote:I give the best criticism here. :P

Yeah and pigs fly.
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go away Kirk, you have no business here :x , I don't love you anymore
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.Banshee wrote:go away Kirk, you have no business here :x , I don't love you anymore

yes finally! looks for someone new to love. >.>
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Kirkaldi wrote:
.Banshee wrote:go away Kirk, you have no business here :x , I don't love you anymore

yes finally! looks for someone new to love. >.>


You will need to go on-topic sometime, people are looking for serious criticism, not your silly loves story's.
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what about text placement is that okay for the sig?
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dude1977956 wrote:what about text placement is that okay for the sig?

I think it's good. I like how it changes color.
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It's fine. Though i'm not a fan of text that sticks to the border.
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