Realism Tag??

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Realism Tag??

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This is my attempt at breaking out of our "AC Box". The stock is included and the rest of the pictures I used to create the background I took when I was in Rome a couple years ago. I always thought it would be fun to use them in a sig. This is my first real attempt at doing a sig like this, so I would appreciate any suggestions/ideas/dislike. Feel free to be as harsh as you like :)

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looks great lavapk. i'm not an expert on realism tag,
but all i can say is it has depth, emotion and a good
composition.

idk, i just like it.

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bump still needs critique
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Imo the wall next to her, or whatever it is kind of limits the whole tag. Make it smaller or perhaps use another stock.
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I think the text should be given a little more emphasis. Otherwise, it looks great for your first try.

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Melez wrote:Imo the wall next to her, or whatever it is kind of limits the whole tag. Make it smaller or perhaps use another stock.

You know, my brother said the same thing. He absolutely hated the brown wall, and said it was too overpowering. There's nothing I can do about it now, I tried making it smaller but I would basically have to start over. I'll keep that in mind next time I try one though :D



Thnx fena!
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