New Sig =] (Maybe)

Foilin · Post by **Foilin** » Thu Aug 17, 2006 7:08 pm

Good? Bad? If so what can i do to make it better

Moogie · Post by **Moogie** » Thu Aug 17, 2006 7:53 pm

Hmm... I think the green is too bright, and the fuzzy pixels at the top and bottom of the image detract from the overall quality. Do something to make the green space less contrasting with the image on the left, and more interesting/easy on the eye since it takes up most of the room in the signature. Consider also doing something with the text... perhaps a very light blue(?) would match your character's sword and shield more closely, which would apply more of a correlation between the two halves.

I might also suggest blending the join between the left/right sides of the signature, but that would be purely personal choice I think. It doesn't look bad as it is, but I myself would maybe try to break up the straightness of the line and make it a little more interesting.

One final critique, if I may. The animation may require more frames, especially with the orb effects going around. Currently you have two/three frames that look good, then a frame with the orbs in a different stage of rotation, and then a final frame with the orbs in an entirely different place. This makes the animation feel awkward.

All in all, though, not a bad effort.

4.5/10

Foilin · Post by **Foilin** » Thu Aug 17, 2006 8:00 pm

yeah more frames would help and i can work on that, but this only took around 15 minutes =P thanks for the crit =]

Rockshmo · Post by **Rockshmo** » Thu Aug 17, 2006 8:12 pm

Try making the animated part smaller and "inside" the sig instead of a part of the sig. Maybe throw your character render up there on each frame while the animated part goes.

CrimsonNuker · Post by **CrimsonNuker** » Fri Aug 18, 2006 1:45 am

its cool but huge! 7/10

Draquish · Post by **Draquish** » Fri Aug 18, 2006 2:44 am

get fraps and take more screenshots so it looks kinda like a movy ^^

Blyth · Post by **Blyth** » Fri Aug 18, 2006 7:24 am

Yeah, make something like this -

I'm planing to make one of these too - movie sig FTW

zanzan_xiao · Post by **zanzan_xiao** » Fri Aug 18, 2006 2:35 pm

yeah ur siggy are a little bright thought but Blyth idea are really good , but u noe ur signature are GOOD as it it right now but u could add anything to it to make it look a little interresting u could do it , too.

Foilin · Post by **Foilin** » Wed Aug 23, 2006 7:09 pm

draquish wrote:get fraps and take more screenshots so it looks kinda like a movy ^^

working on it =D