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CnC please

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Please tell me how I could improve it.
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Tilt the render so it can go with the flow more.
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A bit too light at the left side, 7,5/10
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True, put the focal somewhere else, as it will flow better when it's, in this case, on the right. Also, pay attention to where your light source is, and where are the reflections on the focal. KIU!
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