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I'm still a noop with photoshop

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What do I need to do to improve it?
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Blur the BG a bit, I can't see what is BG and what is the effects well. Also, work on blending for now.
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yeah
i think that, if u just think about how it looks only, it looks good but once you stop and look at it for a while, it seems like u have 3 diff things, left, middle, and right
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The flow is seems to be going in different places and the render seems distorted, I don't know if it is, though. But should try to work in some depth as well blending.

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oh, i just noticed he's helding his sword >.> lol
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Sharpen it a bit, and the flow is right left right left down. Fix it.
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How about now?
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Other one was still better, and its still over sharpened. :banghead:
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imo, that one's a lot better : D
u gave it a "better" flow :P
about being over sharpened, so what.. it looks good......
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