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It's a tid bit on the bright side for me...
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the idea is good, but it still needs some work imo.

the only thing i don't like about the sig is the very
blurry text. i like to be able to read what a tag says
without having to look at the title of the tag to make
a guess of what the text could say.

the rest is allright. i like the choice of colors, but
imo you can do more with the sig than you did now. it
all looks a little flat and empty atm.

i like how you tried to create depth by blurring parts
in the background, but this works better when there's
more going on, or when the blurring comes in several
different blur levels.

i'd give it a 6.5/10 as it is now.

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lavapockets wrote:It's a tid bit on the bright side for me...


At my computer at work it's no where near as bright. My new home monitor must be on some funky settings because the word exam comes through as a neon yellow that almost blinded me :) stupid computers

On this computer, I like the color scheme, but it feels a little unfinished. I also noticed something. The right side of the sig seems to stop along an invisible wall....maybe if you pulled the right side out a bit more if would give you a little more room to play with the depth?
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Seems nice. At some parts too blurry, but we can live with it. :D Looks like the blurry version of "Stressed Out" and I like this piece better.

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believe it or not, but 2 days ago when i made this tag, i just got my eyes dilated lol, and when the text was blurred i was able to read it better for some reason.

thx for the feed guys, i'll be sure to improve next time.
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way too bright
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Love wrote:way too bright

how is that bright ... its blurred, i think you really need an eye exam
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_Panu_ wrote:
Love wrote:way too bright

how is that bright ... its blurred, i think you really need an eye exam


Well all the white does tone up the brightness, and if tht's not your thing..
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