CnC ~ SpaceMarine {Updated}

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CnC ~ SpaceMarine {Updated}

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v1: Image
v2: Image

Comments and critique please, also which one looks better? :)

Thought I'd go with a somewhat different approach on this one, think it looks nice :P

Edit: Damn 200px height limit on signatures Y_Y

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v3:Image
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Find a way to blend the white better in V2 and it'd pretty neat :)
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Like this?

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Not bad. Way too monotone though.
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HOLLAstir wrote:Not bad. Way too monotone though.



It's supposed to be monotone?

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Deviant wrote:
HOLLAstir wrote:Not bad. Way too monotone though.



It's supposed to be monotone?

Then that makes it dull and lacks depth.
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HOLLAstir wrote:
Deviant wrote:
HOLLAstir wrote:Not bad. Way too monotone though.



It's supposed to be monotone?

Then that makes it dull and lacks depth.


I keep comparing it to your sig, but I just don't get what you mean..

He's standing in the clouds, and behind him is space, some strange stuff appears from the his back, doesn't that create depth?

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It does, although make sure you are using different tones. Using one shade of gray doesn't create that much depth. I'll look around to show you what I mean.
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is this better then?

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Like this?

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Re: CnC ~ SpaceMarine {Updated}

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Better but I would blur the upper right corner A LIL bit, it may be only me but it draws me away from the focal
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