Nsr~Assassin

MasterKojito · Post by **MasterKojito** » Tue Mar 25, 2008 6:49 am

New sig:
V1:

Rate it and comment ploX!
Update!
V2:

HOLLAstir · Post by **HOLLAstir** » Tue Mar 25, 2008 6:58 am

Flow is off. Work on depth. Blur/sharpen the bg to get your focal to stand out more then the bg. Scratch the border, move the text closer to his face. Not a bad piece, just needs work.

MasterKojito · Post by **MasterKojito** » Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:00 am

Added V2. Better or worse?

cin · Post by **cin** » Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:24 am

looks as if you have low opacity on your focal *_*

focal should pop out more, that would make it look much better

BrokenSaint · Post by **BrokenSaint** » Tue Mar 25, 2008 12:21 pm

make the text a bit bigger and fox the blurry edges of the focal. Good job so far, just fix those details.

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