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Sorry, i'm going to be blunt, don't like it too much. Get rid of those brackets around the text, it's not helping. It looks odd to me when the BG is colorful, then your stock/render is b&w. The BG is tooooooo bright, it needs more contrast and more depth. Above his shoulder there's a bright white space, it seems out of place. What you did do really well, was the flow. Flow was dead on, although you need to work on the depth and contrast of the piece.