NSR ~ When Is Summer?

[mmellu]

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EDIT:
v.1


v.2

[aazumak]

the only thin gi would tell you to do is, rasterize your text layer(right click on it, then rasterize) then sharpen it, other than that its nice and simple

[Swindler]

i really hate pop outs! i dont like cartoon sigs. the girl isnt blended. Keep the texts near each other. text on 2 different places makes your eyes look everywhere.

Sorry but i have seen better from you 3/10

[mmellu]

i'll try do something.

[_UnKnOwN]

Too much burn on the girl. you need to find a point thats more burn than the origional and less that the current and then it will be about right.

+1 on the rasterize and sharpening with the text

[aazumak]

i agree, i like the light one much better, but the new 1 has better text


i would maybe make the original just a little bit darker, but like the new 1 is like 4 times as dark as it should be, it needs just a little bit of darkness