cpy. ct. entry piece 2

[MasterKojito]

Here is my submission for cpy cat week 2:

Please rate and comment.

[Millenium]

I don't like the effects on his body and arms. It really destroys the depth. I'll comment more later.

[Waisha]

Lol at the too big small text.

Nice work tho.

[aazumak]

i really like th flow of it all, but i personally think the effects are a bit plain,


but its still really good:)

[_Angels]

i rlly like it but only thing bothering me are those lgihts on the hands and face maby u can remove it =o then its picture perfect for me:)
well about the pic the guy is still creepy xD:P

[fena]

Looking good, MK! What I really like is the unique mystery feel you gave to it - sort of like an old mystery movie. In originality, your tag excels.

I don't like the effects on his body and arms. It really destroys the depth. I'll comment more later.

However, I'm going to agree with Milly. Generally, putting effects over the person and then lowering the opacity so the effect is transparent is a no-no. Because you threw effects on TOP of the person, you don't get a clear background, and like Milly said, the depth isn't as great as it could've been.

Other than that, I like it. Good text placement. Just fix up the small text or change the words so it reads something other than "blabla Ryoko". :]

7/10. Good job!

[rek]

You made his face look sooty. But nice effekts.