[NSR] Breathing It All In

[fena]

Well, I made another one today real fast-like. :]



CnC? It was a real quick one, and I already know some things I'll be fixing up later. Don't like the border, first of all. Text colors aren't that great either.

Anyway. Thank you. :]

Apple apple. <3

[Edit:]
v2:

[Doron]

Nice...

you've got something with humans, eh?

I really like it,

8.9/10

[HOLLAstir]

*cough* Team Carbon *cough* Anyways, I like the concept. She's really dark though, and not blended in. I'd like to see a little more depth to it, get her blended in. Also some sort of a lightsource would be nice to lighten her up. The "It all in" text is too big, scale it down. I'll critique later when you post other versions.

[fena]

Guh. I tried to blend her in, but the more I tried, it seems that the more she stood out. I blurred quite a bit and then erased her out of it, which might have contributed a bit to that.
As far as the light source goes, I was thinking the exact same thing - it's too dark. But I tried to put the light source behind her (the sun), and I wasn't quite sure on how it would affect the actual person.
& I'll fix the text and the border ASAP. I wasn't happy with them either.
I'll post up my altered versions tomorrow. Don't exactly have time (or Photoshop on this computer, for that matter) to do it right now. Can't wait to make this better tomorrow, though.

Thanks, HOLLA. :]

And yuh, Icealya, I have something for humans.

[Faiien]

bandw are always easier to blend

[fena]

bandw?

Sowwie. I'm noob.

[HOLLAstir]

bandw?

Sowwie. I'm noob.

Black and white? Just a guess.

[cin]

i like.

2 things;
- she's a tad too dark. might want to either put a lightsource in it to brighten
her up a bit from the front, or put more light on the sides of her to make her
look more like a contour, like with the sun being behind her and all.
- the black text ("breathing.") is a bit too dark imo. it's so black that it
catches my attention too much. perhaps would be better if you lighten that just
a little bit.

<3

[Millenium]

Another lovely sexy piece <3 Yeah she's a bit too dark, she pops out a bit so try to make some effects around her, that'll naturally blend her in. And she's kind of LQ =\ Such a pity for a pretty stock.

[fena]

Understood. Will be fixed as soon as I get back from school.
Thanks, guys. :]

[fena]

Updated. :]



I'm much more pleased with this one - especially the font. I couldn't work out a good border, so I just took it out.

[HOLLAstir]

Looks better fena. Her face just looks LQ to me. That's the only thing killing it for me right now. Text is much better.

[Faiien]

she pops out alot
mayb you could deblur it a little?

[Snudge]

APPLE APPLE!