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what does the AC think?

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well i just made this with the help of a tutorial and i was wondering what you guys thought of it :)
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I think overall you did a good job ^^ Was that your first sig or the first few?
The only thing is it looks a little plain and too sharpened in some areas. I personally use the blur/sharpen dodge/burn tools a lot and I blur/burn the outside and sharpen/dodge the middle or the focal to create more depth. I like the colors and how it looks like the surface of a sun <3 Good job overall!
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thank you
and no it wasnt my first
my first was bad so i kinda felt the need to redeem myself so im getting back into photoshop and this weekend ive been running around tutorials

heres 2 more tutorials i did today
(this is a big'n)
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I would say cut down on the number of stars for the second one. A real universe doesn't have THAT much stars all the same size right? ^^ Make some bright, make some small, and make some darker. I would use a soft brush with scatter and size jitter on.
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i just used noise and darkened a bit
kinda cheating :D

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