Cpy. ct. entry piece

[MasterKojito]

Well my attempt: Rate and give comments pl0x

[cin]

some of the effects are quite nice, but there's too much going on imo.
too much going on makes it hard to point out the focal.
the girl + ball have depth, the c4d's seem a bit flat.

one thing i really do like, that's the way the front of her face is
blended into that part of the background. the light and choice of bg
color make it look really soft.

hmmm, i think i can also say the contrast between soft and hard in
this piece is a bit too extreme for my taste. like, the softness of
the middle part with her face and the ball hitting the light bg,
compared to the hard yellow+red c4d's which colors don't really match
the softer ones.

i've seen better work from you MK ;]

[rek]

When you make something too fussy you tend to kill the focal of your work. Right now im looking at the red/orange stuff in the bottom right corner. Its need work but its not bad either.